Minecraft Dungeons talk:Illusioner

Is this redundant?
Hi.

There was a recent edit on this page which said this:

"The Illusioner will appear as the main boss in the Lost Settlement. Afterwards, it'll appear as a mini-boss and boss in the Frosted Fjord and as a mini-boss in the Lonely Fortress"

To me, this seemed really redundant so I changed it to this:

"The Illusioner will appear as the main boss in the Lost Settlement. Afterwards, it'll appear as a mini-boss and boss in the Frosted Fjord and in the Lonely Fortress"

User:FVbico undid my edit saying it wasn't redundant. As I don't want to start an edit war, can someone please explain how it wasn't redundant? Maybe a fair compromise could be made? --AwesomeNinja886 (talk) ( Contributions) ( My favorite mob) ( Minecraft Dungeons Wiki project) 19:56, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
 * The original text means it is a mini boss in both levels, and a boss only in the first one, whereas your edit says it is both in both, or only a mini boss in the first and boss in the second, depending on interpretation. Does this clear things up? FVbico (talk) 20:24, 10 September 2020 (UTC)


 * Ohhhhh, I didn't see the part that said "miniboss and boss in Frosted Fjord and in the Lonely Fortress". My bad, I see now.
 * To avoid something like this again, what if it were changed to this: "The Illusioner will appear as the main boss in the Lost Settlement. Afterwards, it'll appear as a mini-boss in the Frosted Fjord and in the Lonely Fortress"


 * I feel like this version is harder to misinterpret. --AwesomeNinja886 (talk) (Smithing Table JE1 BE1.png Contributions) (VillagerFace.png My favorite mob) (Diamond Sword (MCD).png Minecraft Dungeons Wiki project) 20:27, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
 * That loses the info that it's also a boss in Frosted Fjord, and not only a mini boss there. FVbico (talk) 20:30, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I see. How about this?

"The Illusioner will appear as the main boss in the Lost Settlement and again as a boss in the Frozen Fjord. Afterwards, it will appear again as a mini-boss in both levels."


 * This is a bit better, without removing necessary information. --AwesomeNinja886 (talk) (Smithing Table JE1 BE1.png Contributions) (VillagerFace.png My favorite mob) (Diamond Sword (MCD).png Minecraft Dungeons Wiki project) 20:34, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
 * That looks alright. FVbico (talk) 22:24, 10 September 2020 (UTC)