Talk:Minecraft: The Story of Mojang

Opinionative
This article sounds like it was written by 2pp itself. There's a lot of opinionative phrases like "And they have good reason to thank!" "And what was really cool", and there's also a lot of usage of "you" and "I", which shouldn't be used in factual wiki articles. There's also unnecessary uses of exclamation points - it's not supposed to sound like someone is talking to you. May as well just add some stereotypical african american dialect.

"Oh, Lordie Lordie! Dis here article here is really good pal, you'dsa better read it pal! Tis a really good article, mon."

I'd edit this myself but it's 3 AM here and I've got to go. Anyone care to fix it? Turtleey 09:18, 22 June 2011 (UTC)